tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post2590094070538149611..comments2023-11-21T13:48:03.338+13:00Comments on Tuesday Poem: Kiss by Rachel BushUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-12920438731085017482012-05-28T18:49:05.816+12:002012-05-28T18:49:05.816+12:00Really nice poem.
And do check a poem written by m...Really nice poem.<br />And do check a poem written by me dedicated to my dad at <br />http://navneetsinghchauhan.blogspot.in/2011/06/dedicated-to-my-dad-fathers-day-poem.html<br />- NavneetNavneet Singh Chauhanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11388306367153845541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-7052353230981178842012-05-24T03:40:23.364+12:002012-05-24T03:40:23.364+12:00Yes, it's the simplicity that wins here, I agr...Yes, it's the simplicity that wins here, I agree. That, and the sweet punch of that last line. Thanks for it.lillyannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12752638206153634574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-55719119417624352822012-05-23T23:54:45.302+12:002012-05-23T23:54:45.302+12:00Funny, my reaction to this portrait of a divorced ...Funny, my reaction to this portrait of a divorced (I assume) dad was rather more critical than most people's responses seem to be. He seems very angry and negative to me, and demands a kiss after acting like a child to his child. A little poem with a big punch, being told from the real child's perspective. Thank you Rachel and Emma.Penelopehttp://pscottier.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-73880988234132118052012-05-23T20:00:29.161+12:002012-05-23T20:00:29.161+12:00I'm so pleased you chose this one from Rachel&...I'm so pleased you chose this one from Rachel's last collection. It stood out when I first read the book.<br />That simple word that excuses and forgives everything.Helen McKinlayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18429062682694815734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-24982504201239644152012-05-23T20:00:26.667+12:002012-05-23T20:00:26.667+12:00I'm so pleased you chose this one from Rachel&...I'm so pleased you chose this one from Rachel's last collection. It stood out when I first read the book.<br />That simple word that excuses and forgives everything.Helen McKinlayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18429062682694815734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-65492648972455001682012-05-23T00:42:30.327+12:002012-05-23T00:42:30.327+12:00Really, really love this. Those last couple of lin...Really, really love this. Those last couple of lines and how they are positioned work perfectly with the unassuming, conversational tone of the poem. That last line given up to 'kiss'! Thanks so much for posting Rachel's work, Emma :)Elizabeth Welshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15420253723750754324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-56862299878185139972012-05-22T11:03:20.389+12:002012-05-22T11:03:20.389+12:00I also like the simplicity here. It's a straig...I also like the simplicity here. It's a straightforward scene, one we've probably all experienced in one way or another. We move from moment to moment, and the positive ones must count as much as the negative ones. I like the frankness here. And the ending -- short, sharp, sweet.Michelle Elvyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00503119577895402738noreply@blogger.com