tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post8806402243644808392..comments2023-11-21T13:48:03.338+13:00Comments on Tuesday Poem: Yawn by Sarah RiceUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-75303319889768735402015-10-20T10:15:21.199+13:002015-10-20T10:15:21.199+13:00Great choice, Jennifer. Lots of amazing images. I ...Great choice, Jennifer. Lots of amazing images. I particularly love these two couplets: <br /><br />"That at a certain point in the evening/<br />we reel our shoulders in on tiny strings<br /><br />to catch the small warmth of our elbows/<br />and shrink our silhouette"Ben Hurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08367615722744097913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-81378269169362284052015-10-19T19:34:19.447+13:002015-10-19T19:34:19.447+13:00Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this, if a lit...Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this, if a little late in the Tuesday poem week. :0Helen Lowehttp://helenlowe.info/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-14779267284491917122015-10-15T07:55:02.399+13:002015-10-15T07:55:02.399+13:00A good poem - I love the extended metaphor re what...A good poem - I love the extended metaphor re what binds us together. Thanks Jen and Sarah.Keith Westwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03833695634102433794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-4109268111207475522015-10-13T22:32:55.419+13:002015-10-13T22:32:55.419+13:00Another great choice, Jennifer!Another great choice, Jennifer!Kathleen Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645566938871914385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-43604953130581153292015-10-13T17:33:37.929+13:002015-10-13T17:33:37.929+13:00love this poem's originality. And yet at the s...love this poem's originality. And yet at the same time it is so tender so mindful of our shared humanity. A yawn will never be the same again for me. Thank you Sarah and thanks for posting it Jennifer.Helen McKinlayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18429062682694815734noreply@blogger.com