tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post6245912551567453768..comments2023-11-21T13:48:03.338+13:00Comments on Tuesday Poem: 'Fuck you' by John AdamsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-59586297459716198842012-07-17T15:44:32.694+12:002012-07-17T15:44:32.694+12:00Like others I admire the way the legal document is...Like others I admire the way the legal document is used to give an apparent structure to the poetry. I really like the way the poet uses the TECHNICAL language,of a speech therapist to build up to the final'emotional'outburst, showing us how meaning changes according to the way words are spoken...emphasising the age old legal conflict between fact and feeling. It's a great Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-58615503434470575222012-07-17T10:58:42.188+12:002012-07-17T10:58:42.188+12:00Cute, the way the ideas/poems have been pieced tog...Cute, the way the ideas/poems have been pieced together in the spurious legal document format. Most especially the intriguing experimentation in form to fit the subject.AJ Ponderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625252892255925438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-8034794167814561882012-07-17T08:58:13.812+12:002012-07-17T08:58:13.812+12:00Really interesting Mary. The structure - the idea...Really interesting Mary. The structure - the idea of the Briefcase, the poem as evidence - I loved all that. it's great the way the TP hub throws up so many different things - thought provoking.Kathleen Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645566938871914385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-41009319303300935662012-07-17T08:28:00.569+12:002012-07-17T08:28:00.569+12:00Love this poem and your discussion, Mary - the way...Love this poem and your discussion, Mary - the way poetry is all about words: the meaning, the sounds, the weight, the flight, the transportation thereof, the connection they create. And how poetry is about the heart and the intellect. He does this with such gusto, such enthusiasm and such precision -- I really like the combined creative element plus the analytical approach in this. I feel the Michelle Elvyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00503119577895402738noreply@blogger.com