tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post8620726775650421466..comments2023-11-21T13:48:03.338+13:00Comments on Tuesday Poem: Cracked by Johanna EmeneyUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-88259240927391227442014-07-11T06:23:18.413+12:002014-07-11T06:23:18.413+12:00Isn't it wonderful? The building, increasing u...Isn't it wonderful? The building, increasing unease, both in terms of the polar opposite emotions and the crack itself. I really appreciate how personal and 'felt' it is; and the yearning, the expectation embodied in the final line. Thanks all, for your comments - I know Johanna will really appreciate reading them! :)Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14910047585037567891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-25908569824516109352014-07-09T20:06:08.531+12:002014-07-09T20:06:08.531+12:00Yes I really enjoyed it too. It's got so much ...Yes I really enjoyed it too. It's got so much possibility for a dire ending. Very visual that idea of spreading cracks and the ending is great...the idea of her having to tug and sweat to get out but expecting the calm one to be there waiting...says it all. Thanks Elizabeth and Johanna.Helen McKinlayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18429062682694815734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-50725359826592042252014-07-08T13:57:07.486+12:002014-07-08T13:57:07.486+12:00This "could" have been a Christchurch ea...This "could" have been a Christchurch earthquake poem, but I'm kind of glad it isn't. :) Regardless, I really like it, so thanks Johanna and Elizabeth!Helen Lowehttp://www.helenlowe.info/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-298334170177578638.post-81019626903785658532014-07-08T02:38:28.558+12:002014-07-08T02:38:28.558+12:00beautiful...loved the metaphor!beautiful...loved the metaphor!Springtimecanbeanytimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08037835129846842102noreply@blogger.com