the man
in feathers
shuts his eyes squats
amongst jacaranda fallout
drinks cold tea /
forgets to speak up / as if his beginning
had its faults in a syllabic nod
in the screwed-up mechanism of a missing tomorrow
#
he spills daylight
steps on bones
washes his feet / my feet
blackens my shoes / whitens my face
for the photographer
at the gate
#
I tick all the right boxes
check names tickets
the red and blue ribbons
the winners of categories
I cross out others with heads tucked into chests
convinced every fast-food supper is their last / every scrap of blue sky/
field of lupins / every girl washed by the sea /
#
the man
paints a tree
a hot pool of mud
a gap where molecules breed
he pushes me into blurred possibilities
where cargo-cult customers line up
to dismember old myths
flying nuns grab at wasted prayers
the city
exists
on the edge of a steaming oven
I read a book
see for myself how characters are hung out to dry
and how they live
the heat
is in the language
in the breathing fragments
#
my favourite pastime
is watching my neighbour
through a hole in the fence
dance birdlike
into a thanksgiving heap
he offers cold tea
to whoever he thinks is thirsty
whoever’s hungry
he speaks to a snapshot
a face in a face
he’s cracked and marred
by three score years
of sucking
on the smell
of an oily rag
he lives in a drought-stricken room
shifts occasionally
a collage of grafted hybrids
sends out mixed signals
of what branch
what fruit
what tugs the belly
why wait for this flawed human product
to track amongst last year’s residue
I bypass today’s callers
meeting outside
staring in
Editor: Orchid Tierney
Born and educated in Palmerston North, and now teaching in Auckland, Iain Britton is a prolific poet of work with (what I consider) a philosophical-real world engagement. His debut collection, Hauled Head First Into A Leviathan, was published by the esteemed Cinnamon Press in 2008, followed by Liquefaction (Interactive Publications, 2009), Cravings (Oystercatcher Press, 2009) and Punctuated Experimental (Kilmog Press, 2010).
Iain's work is published with permission.
Orchid Tierney is a New Zealand poet who runs Rem Magazine: a NZ Journal of Experimental Writing, and was involved with the Mapping Me anthology of women's writing, although her primary focus at the moment is trying to secure a placement in an MA programme. Visit her at www.orchidtierney.com.
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Iain's work is published with permission.
Orchid Tierney is a New Zealand poet who runs Rem Magazine: a NZ Journal of Experimental Writing, and was involved with the Mapping Me anthology of women's writing, although her primary focus at the moment is trying to secure a placement in an MA programme. Visit her at www.orchidtierney.com.
Please check out the sidebar for other offerings from our Tuesday Poets.
6 comments:
'Jacaranda fall-out' - what an apt description! I had a huge jacaranda tree outside my window for many years and this describes the autumn shedding perfectly. The 'characters hung out to dry' also struck a chord with me. Thanks so much for posting, Orchid!
For some reason, the HTML formatting didn't survive the posting, which is weird - Iain has an interesting treatment of line delineation and it's shame that it doesn't come through but the language still carries the impact.
That's s shame Orchid - blogger is an odd beast at the best of time -- I find I need to hand-edit posts to make lines what they should be. Email me the poem and I can do that if you like. It would be good to get it right. Great post btw.
Oh no! It's okay Mary, I've talked to Iain and he is happy. The problem is actually with the HTML coding of the text editor - I think I might have inputed the wrong code - I'll have a look at it this weekend but thank you!
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Thank you.
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